Wednesday, 5 August 2015

Chapter 1: The Call, Part 1


           Eridan fulfilled his duties well, and he took immense pride in that knowledge.  His eye surveyed the orderly scene before him; the tables were set, the seating arranged, the cushions plumped, the pitchers ready to carry their load and the torches were lit, pushing back the shadows.  He knew that in the kitchens the feast was being prepared as according to his instructions.  The windows were open to provide a refreshing breeze so that the guests would not stifle in the season’s heat.  He looked out into sky and judged by the orb in the sky or ‘Great Masa’ as it was known, that the afternoon was waning, and he knew that he should soon hear news of his master and the feasting would begin.  Eridan looked again looked at the room and all his eye purveyed was to his liking.  He had made every effort to ensure that this founding day, the most important feast day on the calendar would be the best yet.  He directed a servant’s attention to a plant that needed watering and strode out of the room towards his chambers, confident that his instruction would be immediately carried out.

 

            Not that his master would notice the preparations.

 

            As Jahadreel waxed older in years he seemed to becoming less concerned with the details of running his household, which was large and prosperous but much diminished in recent years, especially with the departure of much of his family.  Only his wife Mizrame and his youngest son Hamun remained here in these dark and empty halls.

 

The house was located within the central quadrant of the city; home to merchants, bankers, government officials and of course, many of the Sanctuarist order.  It was one of the oldest houses in the ancient city of Naggarr-Rysh and it required many servants to keep it, among which Eridan was chief.  Yet its running seemed to be falling more and more on his shoulders.  Jahadreel was often absent or preoccupied.  As Eridan walked, he looked about him and saw prestige, honour and wealth, a testament in grey stone to his master’s former status.  Eridan found it a challenge to equate in his mind’s eye the legend of Jahadreel Raheed - war hero, a great Sanctuarist Lishu or teacher, successful businessman and friend of politicians with the old man he knew.

 

Yet, if the onset of his master’s old age was the sum of his worries, then his mind could be at ease.  However, his master nowadays considered himself something of a holy man, or prophet.

 

‘Eridan!’  He looked up towards the sound of the beckoning call.

 

‘Eridan!’  It was his master’s wife, Mizrame, standing on the balcony above him.

 

‘Yes madam?’  Eridan’s voice resonated up towards the distant figure in the lofty shadows.

 

‘Are the preparations complete?’  She appeared anxious to Eridan’s eye and was fiddling with her necklace.

 

‘Yes, madam.’  He affirmed.  She nodded gratefully.

 

She lingered on the balcony; a question seemed to be stuck in her throat.  Eridan remained motionless in the gloom.

 

‘Any news?’  She finally forced out.

 

‘None, yet’ he replied.  Mizrame’s posture sagged noticeably.

 

‘Sorry…’ Eridan offered as consolation.  It sounded pathetic and hollow in that great hall.  With that, Mizrame moved away out of sight.

 

That was why Eridan was also particularly anxious today; he was awaiting news of the end of his master’s self-imposed exile up in the caves of Mount Zaggrathrim, outside the bounds of the city.  He had been, supposedly, fasting and communing with the divine for the space of almost one lunar phase.  It had become the subject of much excitement (and amusement on the part of many).  Many of Jahadreel’s strangest associates had been maintaining a vigil at the foot of the mountain for the duration of his hermitage.  Eridan’s master had said to prepare for his return and invite his friends to come and feast with him.  Eridan moved on down the hall.

 

It was actually quite doubtful that many of his former colleagues would come to the feast; Jahadreel had alienated a lot of them in recent years through his bizarre activities.  Eridan had seen many powerful men over the years turn away in shame or embarrassment, shaking their heads and mourning the waste of it all.  One of the greatest blows to his master had been his public denouncement by Zalphorban, lifelong friend and Master Lishu of the Sanctuarist First Central Cabal of Naggarr-Rysh.  That was, to a degree understandable, as he was purely trying to save face by discrediting Jahadreel.  But it also meant that his master was now walking a very fine line between being a nuisance and being an outlaw, and this was a potentially dangerous time to be in the sights of this new government in Arnak.  Barely two years had passed since the president inaugurated the third Arnakian inquisition in living memory, under Zalphorban’s direction.  Then shortly after Zalphorban turning his back on Jahadreel, came the even greater heartache of Jahadreel’s two older sons and daughter leaving him and the humiliation that followed as they criticized him publicly.  They had been extremely vocal during the last few weeks, saying that their father had gone insane, ignoring all sound advice to receive healing and had descended into the caves of Mount Zaggrathrim to seek counsel from his own babbling echo.

 

Eridan slid open the door to his musty chambers and went in.  The room was quite austere, as Eridan liked it.  He did not go in for much in the way of augmentation but what was there was deeply personal to him and relevant.  Stopping for a moment at his mirror he examined his appearance.  Wanting to look his best for the occasion he was wearing his best suit.  Its finely pressed lines and light hues seemed frustratingly at odds with his own, deep set features and dark complexion.  Two weary eyes leered back at him from under critical eyebrows.  It had been a long day and he wished to rest whilst he could.  He went to sit, reclining on his window seat to get a good view of the street and the approach to the house.  There was not much activity outside; this part of the city was far removed from the bustle of the market places and entertainments. A solitary child played on the corner.  He looked totally devoid of any care, as only children can be.  Eridan’s thoughts went back to his childhood, troubled by the intrusion of the Great War with the Cenothali, once a sister-nation to Arnak but greedy for new lands and glory. It was a dark and terrible time for families, sundered from their fathers and husbands, sons and brothers.  He still remembered vividly the pale shawl of horror on his mother’s face that descended on her at the news of his father’s death, and stayed there during her steady decline into fatigue, sickness and finally saw her to the tomb.  The young Eridan stood there with his little sister, sensing the pity of all around him but inwardly his small heart was a barren wilderness.  He saw a man in full ceremonial war gear, an officer, who addressed him tersely and announced that they would come under his roof and eat from his table.  With that statement he gave a well-meaning but awkward smile.  It was the least he could do for the orphaned children of one of his company; his own personal entourage, he explained.  From that day on, Eridan was of the house of Raheed and he learned to love that man.  He remembered still, how despite Jahadreel’s many responsibilities he made an effort to take time for all in his household, even for a young servant like himself.  He was included, along with others, in family gatherings, celebrations, meals, councils and, as was Eridan’s favourite memory of his youth, in the regular story-telling in which Jahadreel relished.  This was considered an art form amongst the Arnak, who loved the telling and hearing of stories, and Jahadreel was, in the young Eridan’s eyes, a master.  Among the heads of such great houses his manner of rule was unique, if experiences he heard from others of his social caste were anything to go by.  Consequently Eridan felt as much a son as any who called his master their father.  He was bemused by Jahadreel’s bizarre mental state now but he did not want to see him humiliated any more, or indeed belittle the cause of the Sanctuarists of whom Jahadreel was once a prominent figure and Eridan’s father a loyal devotee.  By the great Maker, he would ensure it.

 

As Eridan slumped into the seat he began to drift into an afternoon slumber.  His immediate surroundings began to darken and smudge around him, with his resolve echoing around his mind. To the shadows stealthily passing his window Eridan was oblivious. He suddenly became aware of a bell ringing and his world began to solidify again.  As Eridan struggled to wipe away the weariness from his eyes, he staggered towards the door.  He knew that this was the word he had been waiting for.  He had no sooner got his door open than he was met by another servant, the youngest in Jahadreel’s House.

 

“Yes Tumilir….what news?” Eridan blurted out.

 

“Ah, Eridan.  We meant to come quickly but….”  He seemed abashed.  Eridan was short on patience for this.  “Uh – Huh?”  He nodded with his head at Tumilir.

 

“Well, we lost ourselves in the back streets of the second quadrant trying-to-find-the shortcut-through-the-innerwallatthegateofJophar.”  Eridan just gaped at Tumilir.

 

“Yes….the em, master has risen from his fasting and is proceeding into the city.”

 

“Ah Tumilir!”  Eridan’s face contorted into a smile.  “Good.  Is he near?”

 

“Err….no.  He’s not coming here”

 

Tumilir’s revelation was met again with a blank expression; the smile had fallen away.

 

“He’s proceeding with great haste to the Ziggurat, or at least he was when we gave up on pleading with him.”

 

“What?  The government seat?”  Eridan asked.

 

“Yes.  And he said that he has a message of great importance to the people.”

 

Eridan put his hand over his face and pushed his fingers through his hair whilst inhaling through gritted teeth.  It was a few seconds before his mouth could form words.

 

‘Tell our mistress the news’, he said grimly.

 

The old man was about to do something foolish; he just knew it.  He jerked on his shoulder mantle and thrust past Tumilir.

 

“Shall I inform the guests that the master will be delayed?” he asked.

 

“They could be waiting for twelve seasons if the government or any Sanctuarists there take offence at his ‘message!’” Eridan replied as he hurried down the great hall.

 

Eridan raced out of the servant’s gate into the streets of Naggarr-Rysh.  The great orb overhead was already low in the heavens as the deep blue sky of the afternoon daubed into the warm and fiery orange of evening like colours mixed on some artist’s palette.  The shadows were lengthening and the great mountains of the Hiddotereth range of which Zaggrathrim was the promontory gaped like a behemoth’s maw over the dwarfed city, as if   threatening to devour all and plunge them into a long, black night.  Eridan’s eye was drawn automatically, however, up towards the man-made edifice of the mighty Ziggurat, which rose above the central quadrant of the city.   Its famous nine great stages or steps hugged the side of the valley opposite to the Hiddotereth so tightly that it almost appeared to have slid off the mountains against which it rested, known as the Asotereth.  In the illumination of early evening, its walls of polished obynyx appeared to be aflame, as if heralding the imminent arrival of some demon avatar from the outer world.  It was to this imposing structure, some several thousand footfalls distant that Eridan began to trudge towards.

 

Great houses, palaces, banks, merchant’s guilds, storehouses, government buildings and the occasional Sanctuarist chamber passed rapidly by as Eridan ran unheeded towards his goal along a route he knew well.  He was descending deeper into the heart of the city towards the new government seat at the Ziggurat.  Why the politicians needed such monolithic quarters, he did not know, but to him this grandiose public structure was an indication of a new direction in the regime.  For a serving-man Eridan considered himself, politically astute and he was quite active in his local Sanctuarist lodge, although the truth was that power in Arnak was becoming highly centralized and was increasingly disenfranchising the hoi-poli.  This was a partial explanation for the casting off of old war veterans like Jahadreel from the ranks of the scribal elite, which was firmly entrenched in all political matters among the Arnakim.  At any rate, the Eridan did not trust the Ziggurat, and the sooner he could get his master away from it, the better.

 

Shortly, Eridan became aware of another runner as he discerned a soft padding sound coming up from behind.  He tried to ignore it but it got closer and then a gasping voice cried out for his attention.

 

‘Eridan!’  It rasped.  Eridan slowed and turned to see Ramathjeel; a junior scribe who frequently visited Eridan’s lodge to speak and was a good friend.  Apparently, Eridan was not the only one to hear the news of his master’s intentions.  This would make for an ugly scene at the Ziggurat, if Eridan had to extricate his master from an angry mob of Sanctuarists.

 

‘Eridan!’  Ramathjeeel croaked again as he drew up close and stopped, catching his breath.

 

‘Are you..?’  He motioned towards the Ziggurat.

 

‘Yes, how did you hear?’  Asked Eridan.  Ramathjeel inhaled deeply.

 

‘Not just me brother, the whole quadrant is alive with the news of your master!  There is not a beast within the inner parts of the city that have not heard his followers shout ‘Come and hear the words of the prophet!’’

 

‘By the Maker!’  Eridan exclaimed, pulling at his hair.  He span around on his heel, staring wildly in the direction of the Ziggurat and started again for it with a lengthened stride.  His mind was now racing with implications.


‘I’ll come with you!’  Ramathjeel offered but Eridan was already halfway to the next gate.  Wearily, he trudged on after him.
 

Prologue


“…In The Name Of Ra-man-athara, hear then these words and hearken!


 


A house I have in the city

It is beautiful to my eye

White and clean and tall are its walls

Its windows are like Istrea stone

Shady and cool is its courtyard

Bedecked by a lush green garden

I behold, and am glad to have

My house in the city I love

 

I come to my city-house now

Along the dusty streets I seek

Keenly my feet recall its ways

Until, upon my gaze it rests

Then from without, I know some wrong

Has sullied its former beauty

And now to behold it I weep

In the dust of the city street

 

‘Come and see’, the walls whisper me

‘Come and confirm your thoughts and fears’

‘The Master has returned’, they hail

As upon worn doorstep I tread

‘Do not so place your foot on me’,

The wood speaks.  ‘I serve thee no more’

‘I am your kin, welcome me in!’,

I say.  ‘Come see’, walls whisper me

 

Into the courtyard, urgently

Yonder sunbeam, it warms my brow

The garden I once planted here

Is rank and twisted; darkness reigns

Branch, vine and thorn for light contest

And so they maim and pierce and choke

Their neighbour.  ‘Madness, folly here!’

Unheard I shout.  Walls bid me on

 

As broken staircase I ascend

I note my precious windowpanes

Have lost their lustre, dull they seem

‘How hast thy gleams faltered?’  I ask

‘The blazing sun on our faces,’

‘The dry winds, dust and hail’ they chant

‘But carers I left.’  I reply

Their retort; ‘We did bid them leave!”

 

 

‘Come and see’, the walls whisper me

As to my balcony I mount

I could purvey my house.  But find, 

This vista obscured by gnarled rock

‘I laid strong stones to hold this house

Why have you overstepped your bounds?’

‘We’ve held enough, now we exalt’

‘Exalt?’  I ask ‘Without a base!’

 

‘What evil has beset my house?

Once, fair and full of such promise?

In craft I set my image here

A Temple to you, my children!’

‘So you have seen’ Walls whisper now

‘You placed us here to keep these free

From ignorance, strife, apathy

And vain pride.  Unheard we have been’

 

‘All of these shook for joy’ Said I

‘When laid, given form.  To endure,

They pledged, now their oath’s forsaken

And fast come this house’s ruin

I’ll keep those precious parts that yearn

To join me with my Sanctuary

 And with me find their joyful rest

They must seek the One whom I’ll send…’”

 

 


Hashu Baal Ha, 3rd refrain


From the records, as kept by Jahadreel Raheed